Bless Brian, he's already looking after Sunshine :)
Of course, he is! Thank you for the review. :)
Beautiful beautiful story I know this late I'm just a newcomer to fanfics
Thank you for the compliment. :)
My poor baby
I'm just wondering why Justin did not transfer to Daphne's place. Brian, although a very nice man, is still relatively a stranger. Daphne can definitely put up with him since its temporary.
For somebody old enough to know, running away from Justin was immature. Darn, that must have hurt Justin a lot. All his insecurities surfacing.
This reminds me so much of Will Smith's "The Pursuit of Happiness". But really, few will pull down a very determined individual.
Oh wow! This is really bad... But while reading, I kept waiting for Justin to be raped. He was at least spared with this. Though I know it is still no consolation if this happened to someone in real life.
This is really bad, for Justin not to take the offer of Brian. His dad must have really frightened him. But I like the way you portray Justin, you're giving him backbone despite his circumstance and challenges.
This was really classy of Justin. He's proven that he is not all about money and can return a good turn with another one. I am actually surprised that he gave the dog sketch for free. That really elevated him to Brian's eyes.
Well, nice story, it is very well-written, with not simple language and expanded descriptions..I like that, especially when the author is admiring Justin=)
However you should admit that the characters are FAR Out of character!!! Except for their affection towards each other, I think they have very little in common with original Brian and Justin. For example, Brian is not even trying to pretend an asshole like he always does, he is just al kind and generous and sweet.
This whole story is very enjoyable Terry,I loved reading it ~ Vonnie xx
I loved this alot ~ Vonnie xx
Yaaay for Brian standing up for sunshine ~ Vonnie xx
A very great chapter my friend ~ Vonnie xx
That was hot and I loved thier little declarations there at the end ~ Vonnie xx
Rip his ass off Brian lol ~ Vonnie xx
Homophobic prick!! I really don't like Craig! ~ Vonnie xx
I love your Brian so much ~ Vonnie xx
Loved it! ~ Vonnie xx
A great update ~ Vonnie xx
Darn,things were just hotting up too ~ Vonnie xx
I love Brian in this story alot ~ Vonnie xx
I love a bossy Brian ~ Vonnie xx
Ummm how to proceed...I think a night out at Babylon or Woodys ~ Vonnie xx