Wow...what a plot...awesome...cant wait to dive into it ... like it already.
Thank u for sharing.
Thought I had commented when I first read this. Well time to re-read.
Hi Sophie's mom, Thank you, I"m glad you liked it : ) Please feel free to re-read whenever you want, and I added another chapter earlier today. Thanks for reading, and re-reading ; ) and reviewing. Hugs ~ Janet
Oooohhh I like this.
Hi Lilly, Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I do apologize for not answering when you reviewed this too. I somehow missed it. Thanks again : )
any plans on continuing this?
Hi Snow, I do plan on continuing it, and hopefully can get back to it soon. RL stuff has got me so bogged down right now that I'm having a hard time just finding any free time at all. I should have put a notice on this and I apologize for not doing that. Thanks for the nudge : )
don't stop now!! please update soon!
LOL, Hi Julieta, don't worry, I'll be updating Monday. RL's been a pain in the you-know-where this week and I haven't been able to get a whole lot done on the next chapter but I promise it will be updated, and I won't stop until its finished. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Wow! Great story...
Thank you for sharing...:)
Hi Randy-Fan, You're very welcome : )
Hmmm, a new beginning. Glen sounds like a perfect bad horrible new person to hate. Such a nice change from the evil Ethan. At least Glen sounds handsome, lets hope the casket can be left open.
Hi Lori, Ha, I'll see what I can do about the open casket, I cracked up at that part. I actually do have an anti Ethan fic rolling around in my head but it's going to be a while before I even start it. I will tell you this about it, its going to have a HUGE twist to it. Thanks for commenting ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Man, why does Justin always fall for the jerks. The man sounded a lot like Brian, initially. Anywho, great first chapter!
Hi, Its funny you should say that. When I first started writing this, I tried to make Brian more like cannon but realized *that* Brian wasn't going to work here. I'm glad you like it and thanks for the comment : )
Wow, starting with a bang! Love it!
Thank you : ) I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner, I just now realized your review was here. I'm glad you like it.
Nice start. Interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing where you take this. TAG
Hi Tag, thank you : ) the next chapter is coming up soon ~*~ Hugs, Janet
ooh, now you've got me interested. can't wait to see where you go with this, and when justin meets brian. i'm guessing he isn't going to be too trusting right away, but hopefully brian can break through is walls. please continue soon.
Hi, thanks for commenting and I'm glad you like the story. The next chapter is coming up very soon ~*~ Hugs, Janet
LOVE THIS BEGINNING. REALLY DIFFERENT. GOING TO BE A GOOD ONE. WELCOME TO MW AS I BELIEVE YOU ARE A NEWCOMER HERE.
Hi, thank you, I'm glad you like it : ) and you're right, I'm a newbie here and loving it.
Well written and good plot line. I'm looking forward to more SOON!
Hi Cheryl, Thank you and more is coming up soon. Thanks for commenting. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Poor Justin. Looking forward to when Justin meet Brian.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Hi Lexa, Oh, I agree, poor Justin but he'll meet his hero ( Brian) in the next chapter. Thanks for commenting. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Oh this looks great I can’t wait for Brian to enter the picture. It doesn’t say it is a Brian/Justin fic but I hope it will lead to them being together. I look forward to the next chapter.
Hi Flossee, Brian makes his first appearance in the next chapter and yes, it is a Brian/Justin fic. Thanks for commenting. ~*~Hugs, Janet
I hope Jennifer won't misjudge Brian because of the thinks she didn't see of Craig and Glen. On the other hand, she shouldn't hope Brian being her son's savior and push Justin to move on too soon. Two important men in his life hurt him badly. Justin has to heal mentally and physically before let himself trust again.
It would be great if Molly has a bigger role in Justin life. I think Molly will blame her mother for not listened to her when she told Jennifer her concerne about Justin. How old are Molly ? I imagine her mature for her age. What could she think about all of this ? I put myself in Molly's mind and I would blame Jennifer. Molly can understand the power Glen had over Justin. It explain why Justin didn't say anything. Molly saw the signs that something wasn't right and she told the one person who was able to help : their mother. However, Jennifer failed her and Justin.
Hi, that's quite a review, thank you. I think you'll be surprised at Jennifer ( and Molly) in this, you'll find out why in later chapers. Molly eventually makes a very startling revelation and she's a little older in this fic than she was in the show. Haha, I don't want to give anything else away so I'm stopping right here. Thanks for that great comment. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
I'm intrigued, what a fantastic start to a story! Has me hooked :D
Hi Hannah, thank you, I'm glad you liked it, more up soon.~*~ Hugs, Janet
Thank you : )
OMG!! this is going to be dope!. can't wait for more.
Oh, haha, thank you. I'm glad you like it.
So glad you see this story on Whispers! Loved the prologue as much as I did the first time.
Ahhh, thanks Vin. And, thanks for commenting. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
love it more please.bring on brian
Oh, Ha, don't worry he makes an appearance in the next chapter. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you like the story.
This is very promising :) I'm going to keep on reading it!
Thanks Nim, I'm glad you like the story. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
interesting - looking forward to seeing how thinkgs play our for our boys - this is a familiar angle made new - I love whenn a writer comes up with a totally unique approach
Thank you : ) I'm glad you like it, I'm trying to keep it unique ~*~ Hugs, Janet
This is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.