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That was beautiful.
Thank you snow for reading and reviewing. I apologize for the ridiculous delay in response, I never realized how many reviews I never answered, Yikes. Every reader is very important to me. *Hugs*
"To borrow a phrase from our friend,
:) Very happy you enjoyed it. *Hugs*
That was without a doubt one of the finest epilogues I've ever read and is the best possible conclusion to this masterpiece.
I truly hope that the future selections for fan fiction classics, and featured stories of the month can hold a candle to this brilliant star of writing. It's a very rare treat to read such an exceptional creation and be moved with all emotions as you weaved your amazing imagination into this story.
I laugh at my own attempts to write compared to your genius.
Thank you very much for sharing this with us on Whispers and giving us your universe to enjoy.
Hello Bob, I do believe I sent you a message so long ago, thanking you for all of your incredibly lovely comments, but I just wanted to thank you once again. Having had so much trouble with my health, back when I began posting on here I never had much energy to keep up with reviews. I've decided to go back in time a bit and make sure I properly thank each reader, as their support is so crucial. *Bug Hugs* -Mandi
Damn girl you had me worried there; your vampire theory is genius - love wins!
Oh fuck! Boy I didn't see that one coming. My mind is racing how Brian can change this tragedy for good.
Holy Shit raised to the 100th power!
I do hope you end this story on a high note.
"A vibrato of nervousness struck all chords surging through Brian."
On the violin I'm learning how to perform vibrato without shaking the damn thing. It looks so easy but is so hard to do right. Practice - Practice - and more practice.
I couldn't stop reading now if my house was on fire.
Invite him in; rip off his clothes and take him to bed ;P
"Drop for drop, crystal and crimson vigorously rained from blue and hazel skies."
You can add my brown skies to this line too.
Holy Shit raised to the 10th power!
Damn girl you can write! I'm so into the character descriptions; it's like I truly know these guys and feel their emotions and agony.
Well that went better than I expected. I still doubt that Justin ended Ethan. More like Ethan said the name of the man he loved at the moment of death, and Brandon put Ethan's blood on Justin for fun me thinks. Reading on since like crack cocaine; I can't get enough of this story - take me higher!
"......Vampires will never appear on film."
Ethan's killer wasn't on film but what about the photograph of Justin in 1890? Was he still a human then?
Now I'm wondering how will Brian react to seeing Justin at his loft? He'll need Justin's help to stay alive I fear.
Triple Shit!!! What a tangled web you weave. Real life is going to have to wait until this story is finished.
"Justin learned that there was nothing truer than liars." Every now and then your writing sends shivers of insight down my spine.
Brandon; all we were missing was for an enemy to show up :)
"An arduous cyclone blew through the theater. Strong winds of ecstasy sweeping away all inhibitions. A thick cloud of heavy lust passed overhead, drops of desire rained down."
I love these lines; it's going to get hard to keep finding a way to express how much your writing entertains me.
"A creature of the shadows longing for human companionship was unequivocally the proverbial forbidden fruit. Indeed the two men were star gazing in a garden of Eden. Forbidden temptation and hidden sin blossomed around them, whilst vines of complication strangled the room."
'Was it true? Had Justin himself been the composer of the brunet's sad song?'
You remind me of Melville; poetic prose in spiritual action.
WOW! I totally love this song.
I got news for you; a refurbished Bosendorfer 290 Imperial sells today for about $85,000. The way you describe the sexual tension lurking in their souls is spellbinding to read. Each chapter has grown to hopelessly hook me to this story.
Sexual tension that one can slice with a steak knife! LOL
"A human's emotions were intertwined with their blood. Directly affecting one's scent and taste."
That sentence is the stroke of a master writer with unlimited imagination.
I see skill in every sentence you create.
The meeting was hot! I love your description of such scenes. I too have a love of music and really enjoy this background sub-theme in the story.
Due to 7 days in a hospital for kidney failure and a couple of weeks getting over it at home, I got behind in my review comments; so I'm going to start over from Chapter 1 and once again get lost in your amazing talent with words, plot, structure, and character/scene descriptions.
I strongly feel you could be published if your inner higher self took over completely and you just let it happen. You're that good Mandi.
As any first chapter should, you have opened with a bang and a beginning that demands that the reader keep going.
Besides the fact - Justin can bite me anytime :)
This story is selected to be our Featured Story of the Month on the home page for November.
I finally got to finish this fic, I started quite awhile ago. Anyhoo, it is truly lovely, poetic, and romantic. Loved everything from the concept to how QAF characters were integrated into the plot.
Well worth the blue ribbon!
All the best!
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Hope things are well you for you Hon. :)