I think my review got lost in the March 2016 data crash. I know I gave this an excellent review but can't recall what I said but suffice to say I really enjoyed this story - tension filled, emotional and full of angst. A great AU. Very sad to see I have now read all of the Mouse submissions, I truly hope to see more in the future.
Seriously, my hate for Paul is so intense lol
I love how angry Brian got about Andy risking Justin's health. Protective Brian is one of my absolute favourites.
And yes, Lindsay, Justin IS a better choice than that douche, Paul.
I do not like Paul - AT ALL. God, these boys are so perfect for each other, they must realise this!!!!!!!
My heart is breaking for Justin.
Very emotional--and impactful--story. You very skillfully showed how Justin and Brian eventually joined and complemented each other as equals.
thank you for sharing
An amazing story and a rollercoaster ride of emotions! I loved it!
I really love this story, but I noticed that their last night in Paris is missing from the story. Is there any way to fix that or was it left out intentionally?
Wonderful story !!Perfectly written :) You're truly gifted !!Thank you so much for writing this amazing story. xoxo
What an amazing story. Very moving, I could barely get through the chapter when Andy was begging Justin to end it all. A testament to your writing ability that you didn't become too graphic about what went in the 'Black Marketers' back room. It almost made it worse to imagine it.
amazing, emotional and wonderful story! Thank you so very much for this and I hope you keep writing you truly have a gift. Fantastic and gripping :D
this story was absolutely amazing. i do hope that you are officially persuing a career in writing because you have a true gift this story so filling from beginning to end and left an ere of completion with both the characters and the readers, well done :)
This was very well written. It was sad and dark, not normall my thing , but I wanted to see it through to the end ,which was excellant.
I really enjoyed this alot,it was incredible,and very sad too ~ Yvonne xx
Oh my god,im crying so hard here!!!