Wow,that was a very good read.i enjoyed it immensely . Good job!
I was smoking some good stuff when I wrote that. It was my first attempt to write fan fiction of any kind. During the writing I'd get comments like it was too far out and off canon, but after readers got into the sci-fi of it all, then it seemed they enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and commenting, Rhonda.
What an ending. I remember how fast you wrote this and am amazed at all the technical details. This is definately a classic.
As I just mentioned on another story replying to your comments I'm very grateful for your words and that you're reading this one too. I'm down with a bad cold at the moment but will recover and reply to all your reviews. Thank you very much!
Hurray. We won.
Hopefully all those ships will be enough. Them's some ugly bugs - neat pic though
You really did a number on Ronny's father. Ouch. Brian and Justin sure have remained active in spite of growing older.
Interesting birthday gift for Brian. I'm sure it's a gift that Brian will not be returning.
Boy that was some party!! All that technology and no caller id? lol.
Goooo Project Loverboy!!! Glad to see that Justin hired the right man for the job.
Arghhh, the flight commander is out of there
I'm cooking for a friend's birthday affair but I wanted to respond to one comment for now and thank you for reviewing each chapter VERY-VERY MUCH!!! I was in a weird mood when I wrote this chapter and wanted to screw somebody in the plot and this clown jumped out and asked for it :)
I can just imagine Justin painting the vividly colored image.
Exciting Chapter, fight and all. You got rid of all the dead wood, gave the kids some enjoyable recreation time.
Haha. One of the professors got exactly what he deserved
It's nice to know that the insects bite the dust in Brian and Justin's lifetime.
I got to thinking it was a better story if we could move the events forward in time and keep them in the story when it happens; thus, I got the idea how to make it happen.
Such a sad, sad chapter.
Yeah, I had tears in my eyes when I was writing this one - a bitter shocking moment in the plot.
Now I'm hungry for Irish stew. LOL
RL has been very busy lately - I feel like a two legged cat in a sand box! Thanks for all the great comments. Yes, Irish stew is wonderful. I'm half Irish, half English myself.
I like Tommy's parents. Wish all parents were like that
Fiction is terrific; we can create perfect people writing fiction.
I can see that CBS is going to get better and better
The hamster was smoking the good stuff when he came up with this plot twist.
What a three some.
Yeah! My first three way in prose!
Peter Pan is back!!!
You can't keep a good stud down for long!
Hopefully I'll get to visit Ireland someday.
Just when I was wondering how old Brian was you supply the answer. I enjoyed how much trouble you got Michael into. Shame Justin forgave him. LOL
There's a soft spot inside me even for a creep like Michael.
Sorry to hear that Brian is having problems. How nice that Justin took care of Jerry's parents. Jerry really lucked out.
When I went and read this story again, I was shocked about some of the plot twist I created herein. I do remember this story flew together very rapidly and I typed as fast as I was thinking up the details, and that was very fast.
So now they own Ireland!!! I know Jerry is going to be a big help to Brian and Justin, I just wish that Justin wasn't quite so enthused with Jerry. Wonder what Tyler needs. On to the next chapter to find out.
I knew this was coming, but it is still sad to read about Alex and Roberts demise. I can't help but wonder just how old Brian and Justin are at this point.
I'd forgotten about Justin Jr. So much to re-remember. Am thoroughly enjoying this story.