Poor Jennifer - still trying. Sad to see this is last snippet in this series, it was looking to be one of those 'must read the next instalment' series that are so enjoyable. I really liked this.
At least she is trying I guess. Keep them coming :-)
I can actually visualize this happening. Looking forward to more :-)
nice story :)
o, nice :D
Loved the series. Your writing made the characters so easy to imagine in my head. Good stuff..
Aww i'm glad :3 there may be more stories in the future
thank you <3
I would love if you made more stories to the series!
I'm planning on, i've got a few ideas for further stories :3
I'm glad you enjoyed them
thank you <3
Just read these three installments. I love it. Brian so relishes in making people uncomfortable, and if it happens to be Jennifer (before they got to know each other better, of course) then it's all the better. :-) Hope to see more in this series.
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying it! I agree, Jennifer is perfect for Brian to make so uncomfortable! There will be more, i don't know how often i will update it because they're more like ficlets that fit together but defo more :) thanks for reading and reviewing xo
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for that.
Loved it, the thought of Brian knowing Jennifer was trying to be understanding but definitely uncomfortable made me laugh, thanks Chris
Author's Response: glad you enjoyed :) thanks for reading and reviewing! xo
i think jennifer's bending alittle. brian hit it on the nose though, “This is killing you, isn’t it?”
thanks for reading and reviewing
Well that's a start.... at least they're talking and Jennifer agreed to "try" and accept Brian....lol...
Author's Response: haha yeah:) thanks for reading and commenting xo
sure debbie's going to stick her nose into that conversation.
yes justin could call his mother more and jennifer can try to accept brian.
Author's Response: agreed :) thanks for reading and commenting xo
Well done! I am so happy you are making this a series!
Author's Response: thanks :) yeah, hopefully it should be good, it's my first 'series', i've done multi chaptered but this is different. *crosses fingers* xo
Is this completed???
i'm writing a sequel, it should be out either today or tomorrow
thought i had left a comment before.
jennifer was left filled with her anger and brian's honesty. can she handle it? some of her anger should have been directed at justin. he should have let her know where he was living and what was going on.
Author's Response: :o ... i definately didn't delete it :/ There is going to be a sequel, so all this will be worked out thanks for reading and reveiwing xo
You cannot leave us hanging.
Very good episode filler. Please continue.
Author's Response: hehe don't worry :) I've started the sequel! thanks for reading and reveiwing xo
I loved the sparring between Brian and Jennifer
Author's Response: glad you liked :) thanks for reading and reviewing xo
I've always loved the Brian/Jennifer sniping! Definitely want more please ;-)
Author's Response: haha i'll see what i can do ;) thanks for reading and commenting xo
I enjoyed this but 'where is Justin living?' Debbie? Ethan?
glad you enjoyed :)
It's set in season 1 so he's living with Debbie. In my head I was thinking that it's been about a week since Justin ran away to New York.
thanks for reviewing!